You Asked For It Poet Poem by me poet yeps poet

You Asked For It Poet

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Your two or many poems
You need to edit it...
as too many repetitions
make the prosaic poem
into statements.

NOT POETRY REALLY SORRY

Well that may be my view only
You asked for it...

If you only love appreciation
then no one will teach you
as bluntly as I do..

Drop all first caps
I told you earlier also..
Did I not?

Poets must read more poetry
comment on many
then see the difference
what is Prose
what is Poetry

apply more imagery
Show
don't tell

Poetry must have simile's and metaphors
for readers to adore

Saturday, October 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: emotion,learning,poetry,problem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendra Rout 31 October 2018

Great poem shared I enjoy this poem

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 May 2018

O all poets of this world just listen ITS A VERY GOOD POEM 277 COMMENTS MORE THAN FIFTY THANKS OF YOURS AN EASTERN STYLE POEM I AM A ROMANTIC POET BUT FIRST READ PABLO NERUDA WILL YOU THEN MY LOVE POEM TO READ I WILL POST IT TOO TILL THEN FRIEND ADIEU..TOO LONG PLEASE EDIT IT IT WILL DRAW MORE GENUINE BEES THAN THOSE WHO THROW AWAY GOOD WORDS FREELY I AM NOT SURE THEY READ IT

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Rajnish Manga 15 October 2017

This will surely serve as a guide to other poets. Thanks for sharing.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 October 2017

great and hopefully to thank you RM

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2017

Poetry must have simile's and metaphors for readers to adore. You are very right. Repetitions should not be done unnecessarily. Whenever necessary poems should be edited. We are learning from each other. Cooperation continues. Nice advice is given in this poem. An interesting poem is shared.10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 October 2017

Thank you KM SIR

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