Your two or many poems
You need to edit it...
as too many repetitions
make the prosaic poem
into statements.
NOT POETRY REALLY SORRY
Well that may be my view only
You asked for it...
If you only love appreciation
then no one will teach you
as bluntly as I do..
Drop all first caps
I told you earlier also..
Did I not?
Poets must read more poetry
comment on many
then see the difference
what is Prose
what is Poetry
apply more imagery
Show
don't tell
Poetry must have simile's and metaphors
for readers to adore
O all poets of this world just listen ITS A VERY GOOD POEM 277 COMMENTS MORE THAN FIFTY THANKS OF YOURS AN EASTERN STYLE POEM I AM A ROMANTIC POET BUT FIRST READ PABLO NERUDA WILL YOU THEN MY LOVE POEM TO READ I WILL POST IT TOO TILL THEN FRIEND ADIEU..TOO LONG PLEASE EDIT IT IT WILL DRAW MORE GENUINE BEES THAN THOSE WHO THROW AWAY GOOD WORDS FREELY I AM NOT SURE THEY READ IT
This will surely serve as a guide to other poets. Thanks for sharing.
Poetry must have simile's and metaphors for readers to adore. You are very right. Repetitions should not be done unnecessarily. Whenever necessary poems should be edited. We are learning from each other. Cooperation continues. Nice advice is given in this poem. An interesting poem is shared.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great poem shared I enjoy this poem