You Came, Came Breeze, Not A Leaf Moved Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

You Came, Came Breeze, Not A Leaf Moved

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You make my mood— green from the grey of grim,
And remind me of good days to me dear,
You have the heart my wails of woes to hear,
Your stays, though ever brief, lift me like cream.
And this time too I was looking forward
To meeting you, O my life's sole delight,
Excited did feel this long locked up bird,
Trying to catch some winks that fateful night;
But came the breeze, passed by, not a leaf moved,
Your fragrance came but left— not hugging me,
Left me in doubt— were it one that once loved,
And once our witness, silent seemed the sea.
Nor do I live nor die, oh what a burden,
Me that never erred, pleading is for pardon.
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Sonnets | 01.09.14 |

Friday, June 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love,romance,separation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 28 June 2019

Trying to catch some winks that fateful night/But came the breeze, passed by, not a leaf moved/Your fragrance came but left— not hugging me/Left me in doubt— were it one that once loved.....great romantic expression sir! loved reading this fabulous poem.....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 June 2019

Thank you Dr Swain, you have picked up the right lines, the heart of the poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 June 2019

I appreciate Dr Swain for your sincere comments and liberal rating for the poem.

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Jane Campion 28 June 2019

Great expression moves me. Thank you for your kind comments.

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 June 2019

Many thanks Jane Campion for your beautiful comments.

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