Wednesday, August 19, 2015

You Give Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

You give me the delight,
When the readers' faces
Flash like light.
My pain I paint on your chest
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Neela Nath Das
COMMENTS
Dr Antony Theodore 11 October 2015

My pain I paint on your chest you are my poetry you set my emotion free. so wonderful romantic sense in your words and in your poem. thank you very much. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2015

Deeply envisioned and nicely depicted. A beautifuI poem I like most. Thanks for sharing.....10

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Muhammad Ali 20 September 2015

We create a world inside us. Then we like to live inside that. Nice poem. Just like this, The Great Creator also receives something interesting from us!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 28 August 2015

Wow passionate and lovely in expression! Short n sweet. Poetic feelings. Kudos.

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 August 2015

Love is dripping from lines thick. Loved it Neela.

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Chuy Amante 22 August 2015

Freed emotion a great thing indeed feels like flowers not a single weed

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