You Have No Shortfalls! Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

You Have No Shortfalls!

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You are as perfect as the sun, to wake up every day,
And To rest every night in the quietness of dark rays,
You have no shortfalls to concern, but you have treasure,
That is stored safely in each and every cell of the divine shelter,
The shortfalls and inadequacies are created by the mortals,
You have the divine body to keep clean and display as portals,
Ignore the gossip of the weak, that tries to collapse your Citadel,
Stand tall and be happy as you have no shortfalls, as visuals,
You can run fast and take rest as you desire,
These jungles, made of trees and concrete, are ours,
Go out and play with the rain, snow and the cheating moon,
Babies are there to watch, oldies are there to catch for wise fun,
Youngsters are there to print the genes of new generations,
So you have no shortfall, as you are among any one of them.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Excellent portrait of attributed traits.. But I wish it could have been a little longer..

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 04 December 2012

the first two lines with the sun as simile is fantastic

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Vishal Sharma 03 December 2012

nice poem indeed....really enjoyed this one..

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