You Have So Much To Give.... Poem by Neha Aradhye

You Have So Much To Give....



You have some magical power,
that turns me from a quitter to a venturer....

You have a surpassable fidelity,
that lightens & inspires me....

You have an endless affection for me,
so tender, warming & glassy....

Your heart is like an ice & snow,
with loads of transparency & gusto....

You have an immense love for me, so unconditional,
I like when u say, 'You're my sweet-loving ANGEL'...

And so,
I wanna spend my life with you,
under the dusky skies, wit the sparkling stars,
and feel the cold waving curtains of winds......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dhanesh Aradhye 03 June 2009

nice work! ! ! liked it....tender, warming and glassy.. sweet words.. very sweet & cute.... :)

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Her Name Is Taylor 03 June 2009

that had some good imagery, i liked it a lot..... very very very well written, a definite ten from me! ! ! ! :))

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Neha Aradhye

Neha Aradhye

India, Pune
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