you came back.
with your goofy grin,
and your soft spirit-
you came back.
just for me? ?
for my sickly state
and my lousy life-
just for me? ?
guess what's next? ?
it's our matching moods,
and our strange sayings-
that's what's next.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice combination of feelings, alliteration, and the 'framed' stanzas with those repeated lines... it almost makes the poem feel mundane/repetitive, which fits the poem well, since your words are hinting at something of that sort. The last line is perfect.