You Left Me, But You Didn’t Poem by Elizabeth Middleton

You Left Me, But You Didn’t



You left me, but you didn’t.
You are gone and I cannot find you.
They tell me you left for a better place,
But you are not really gone see,
There is still a piece of you here in my heart.
I hold you close everywhere I go.
I think of you, everything seemingly rings of your memory.
Where I am, you are,
And you live on in me.
So you are not really gone,
Not completely,
Although I would rather have you here beside me,
And loose this constant pain,
I can still have you as mine.
Then I can live on without you,
But you are here beside me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
CoreyLeigh Mason 03 May 2009

I don't want to sound like I'm being mean or snotty, but it was hard for me to read the poem. The words got massed up and jummbled in my mind. It could just be my old age or lack of brain power, but maybe the wording is off somewhere. Other then that, I really did love the poem. It have a meaning and then a deeper meaning that you draw from it once you finally reach the end. I giv it two tumbs up. I do more but I only have two thumbs..but I could steal one just for this...

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rago rago 30 April 2009

very very good poem to ponder on.....i can live on without you but you are here beside me.......very thughtful lines.

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