Alice Perfect


You Licked The Frozen Pole-Odd - Poem by Alice Perfect

they all laughed at the
stunt you fell for,
'it tastes like peppermint
when it gets cold'

I wasn't in the park
that day
i was sitting on the
deck with an electrical
probe on my tongue, connected
to a solar panel
learning to count millivolts
by their taste

does that make us odd?

Topic(s) of this poem: friendship, love


Comments about You Licked The Frozen Pole-Odd by Alice Perfect

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/22/2015 12:05:00 PM)


    Outstanding poem on love subject, your metaphor in this poem is amazing and beyond doubt one of your best poem...10+++ (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/21/2015 3:54:00 PM)


    Learning to count emotion on this sharing is wonderfully and metaphorically presented. Very amazing.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 21, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 2, 2015


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