You Licked The Frozen Pole-Odd Poem by Chuy Amante

You Licked The Frozen Pole-Odd

Rating: 5.0


they all laughed at the
stunt you fell for,
'it tastes like peppermint
when it gets cold'

I wasn't in the park
that day
i was sitting on the
deck with an electrical
probe on my tongue, connected
to a solar panel
learning to count millivolts
by their taste

does that make us odd?

Saturday, November 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 22 November 2015

Outstanding poem on love subject, your metaphor in this poem is amazing and beyond doubt one of your best poem...10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 November 2015

Learning to count emotion on this sharing is wonderfully and metaphorically presented. Very amazing.10

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