Monday, March 27, 2006

You May, As Well Comments

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You may, as Well
Cause as far as I can Tell
You have to ring,
Your Own Bell!
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David Darbyshire
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Melvina Germain 05 September 2006

Definitely right, you are in charge of your own destiny--very good poem Dave------Melvina

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Ernestine Northover 27 March 2006

Absolutely right, you do, David, only you can form your own future. As long as you don't dropp a clanger! Love Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 27 March 2006

For whom the bell tolls.We can find the strength, we must, lets not give in to the option for as long as we can.You have shown great faith in this.thankyou David.I hope that many will benefit from your wise wordsLove Duncan

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Patricia Gale 27 March 2006

I pulled hard on the rope and it fell. Now what? Grand insight Dave Patricia

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Gina Onyemaechi 27 March 2006

Nice to have you back, Davey. Good holiday? As for your poem, hmm, I like the caring feeling behind it, but I feel you could express it with greater impact. Please don't hate me for saying so, sweets (as if you would!) . Love, Gina.

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