You May Propose, I Dispose Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

You May Propose, I Dispose

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No we're prime, persisted the senses,
Riled red, agitated
For a prime place ahead,
Ego felt, it's him that disposes.
Soul warned all: hold thine hackney horses,
Me not willing, you can't
Even live a moment,
Better stay within your defences.
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Reflections | 01.07.15 |

Saturday, April 27, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: identity,power
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We all know the story of a frog in well. So are senses and the pretender called ego. They may propose, but who disposes? If only God had made soul to be assertive.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 27 April 2019

Soul warned all: hold thine hackney horses, Better stay within your defences.... //..... Thanks for the poem and the Notes. They carry a sublime message.

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 April 2019

It is nice to see your comments after a long time, Rajnish Manga.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 April 2019

I have stored in my mind...man proposes, God disposes! This is the theme of this amazing Limerick sir....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 April 2019

Soul is the enabler but not the doer, only a witness. If it were a little more assertive, may be, most of the ills could be wiped out. But, but...Thank you Dr Swain.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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