You Passed The Time Poem by Marilyn Shepperson

You Passed The Time

Rating: 5.0


We talked together for hours and hours
And put the world to rights
We walked along to my home together
And together, spent the night
When I awoke the following morn
To find that you had gone
Was I surprised, no, not I
I felt relieved; I didn't cry
You had used me
And I had used you
With no loss on either side
It was a fair exchange
Will I try to find you again
I don't think so, for you see
When we met, my fleeting friend
I was drunk and in need of temporary company

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preeti - is here! 11 August 2006

No regrets....maybe you have expressed the truth. but at my age i cannot imagine this no regret situation! Preets

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Catastrophe King 03 August 2006

I rated this one a full 10 as I thought it has a sense of reality and the way you have expressed the entire episode is just wonderful.... a good read indeed!

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Vision Ghost 03 August 2006

Oh yes, been there done that, still got me into trouble. But absolutely the truth, played out of how society has completely gone against, what we are designed for. A brilliant synopsis of a one night stand!

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Francesca Johnson 03 August 2006

No regrets....if that's how you both look at it, that's OK. Nice write, Marilyn. Love, Fran xx

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