You'Re My No.1 Poem by Praveen chaudhary

You'Re My No.1

Rating: 5.0


Since the beginning of time,
since the moon started to shine.
the first dance i danced in the rain,
it was you, who was in my brain.

it was the strength of your stare,
it was the smell in the air.
it was the smile on your lips,
which made my heart had a solar eclipse.

the way your blue eyes shine in the moon light,
i hope we can dance the whole night.
just you and me with your arms around me,
beneath the sky full of stars and moon, see.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
P.S: - I have, I do and I will always love you, only you.
In this birth, till my death and even after that.

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{21/09/2013}
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shalini Samuel 30 October 2013

:) playful aand romantic write brother

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Praveen Kumar 02 November 2013

thanks shalini and Kaylin for your beautiful comments... yup! kaylin actually I know nothing about poems and It's writing style but I really love to write. and I'm sure I will improve soon if I will get to meet people like you

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Hazel Durham 02 November 2013

Perfect in every way, so romantic and as fresh as a summer breeze, with delightful lines about the truth of love!

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Praveen Kumar 08 November 2013

thanks a lot :) I didn't expect so heart touching words from you.... thanks for your comment.

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Vikas Tripathi 07 July 2015

wow.... simply awesome.....

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Ashlee Vandyken 15 November 2013

this is beautiful, i love it!

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Poetheart Morgan 14 November 2013

Oh! I love that poet, like you said, very romantic poem and beautiful! ! ! !

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Praveen Kumar 14 November 2013

thanks jeevi... i just rhymed my feelings in this poem

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Mitran Zv 11 November 2013

the poem is nice. expressing the real feel.

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