Arienne Smith

Rookie (Sep.20.1989 / Oakland, California)

You(Things About You) - Poem by Arienne Smith

The daylight which shows a thousand pictures shines upon your face
the smoothness of life shows your evervescent grace
The poems that you write for me shows for me this much [----}
and makes me light to your touch
You rub my face a thousand times and it never gets old
the way you look in my eyes lets me see every story from the soul
This kiss has me floating from a high I can't kick
you seem to be my candle and me your ever burning wick
I know by this poem my love you can surely tell
but if not then i'm not showing you to well


Comments about You(Things About You) by Arienne Smith

  • (9/9/2006 1:01:00 PM)


    nice write Arriene, very creative and attic beauty.maxim muyu (Report) Reply

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  • (1/3/2005 1:56:00 AM)


    Good poem; if you could correct the two spelling mistakes. One is effervescent...
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  • (1/3/2005 1:41:00 AM)


    Excellent. I liked the web stroks reference too. :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 3, 2005



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