You Versus I Poem by DM W

You Versus I

Rating: 5.0


If you are the fixed perspective,
I am the wild, restless creator.
If you are the dry bones of boredom,
I am the rose pink flesh of longing.
If you are the grey stone of dogmatic creeds,
I am the blithe spirit of enchantment.
If you are the prevailing order,
I am the subversive act.

Thursday, June 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: creativity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 04 June 2020

Excellent! I think this is simply marvellously well-written and expressed a great poem Dominic, that I will and hopefully many more will read and then reread many times. A original poem that seems to slap the reader in the face to wake up and listen to what's on display. And what's wrong with that,10++ and most certainly added to my favs. Thank you for writing this Dominic and take care.

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Dominic Windram 05 June 2020

Thanks Shaun...I spent considerable time working on this one to get across what I wanted to say.

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