Young September Poem by goldtooth grin

Young September

Rating: 5.0


Hey young September
you're growing old way too quick
I remember smell of salt
lying with her on the beach
motionless like lizards
craving nothing but the sun
unlike lizards never wanted
our hearts to slow right down

I would give it all away
I would give it all up
kingdom for a little sunshine
kingdom for a warm July

Hey young October
you are worse than your brother
you brought leaves and coughing people
and they each look like the other
all my strength has long dissolved
berry Lemsip in a glass
I know that I can not make it
past December I won't last

and I would give it all away
I would give it all up
kingdom for a little sunshine
kingdom for a warm July

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 22 September 2011

Months around in your finger tips, and look you have awesome life trips...i like the way you manipulating the year tour but i like this line most 'Kingdom for a warm July'...Have a good year hope all months give better than your expectation...then smile with those goldtooth hahha joking_Unwritten Soul

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Elena Sandu 11 September 2011

Very nice flow, love your poem! .. I also wish to go back to July, because, couldn't been a lizard on a beach this summer (waited for it all year! !) , right now watching the cloudy sky and as you say the coughing October I see coming near.. A sigh and a tiny tear dance in the corner of my eye when I think of the exasperating looong winter, I will not watch the gray sky but try to have a lift up not from the kisses of sun but from the mountains of snow piled high on the edge of the road..another sigh..I go now, singing: 'and I would give it all away I would give it all up kingdom for a little sunshine kingdom for a warm July' Thank you for share,10

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