Your Attention Guys Poem by me poet yeps poet

Your Attention Guys

Rating: 5.0


Hello your views please

''MOMS SMILES''...
Despite this being my best poem

it will never get into the first 500 list

the earlier guys got 10 points

now PH has reduced it to 5


It's like comparing bananas with apples
wow

sad no none has pointed this out though

to Promoters of PH

some one please do

Saturday, October 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: competition ,composition,poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
opoet me poet 07 June 2018

Yes Sir after every cloud the sun comes up here again But in Maths neither the sun nor rain nor clouds have any say...It's ONLY PH MIND today they perhaps forgot their mathsThat's what my poem does say..Thanks for the HOPES ANY WAY many have translated it into thier mother tongue too So I thank all of you

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Akhtar Jawad 06 June 2018

Don't be disheartened, some times a beautiful day comes after a lot of waiting.

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