Vishal Sharma

Gold Star - 5,400 Points (India)

Your Brother Loves You - Poem by Vishal Sharma

when i held my head high beneath the clouds
i still see your smiles being protected
however you only breath in figment of my dream
i never let the roses fed far rar away


you were the princess my family was blessed with
you were the reason every season was spring
you were my doll and you departed with a doll
i searched you beneath every place where soil roll

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Ode


Comments about Your Brother Loves You by Vishal Sharma

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/3/2015 1:53:00 AM)


    Wonderful poem for the sister and siblings...you were the princess my family was blessed with
    you were the reason every season was spring..Amazingly written
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  • Sanjukta Nag (11/10/2015 10:49:00 AM)


    The sweetness of a holy relationship is penned so heartily. Very heart touching. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/10/2015 10:47:00 AM)


    you were the reason every season was spring
    This line is amazing. loved it.
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  • (11/9/2015 10:35:00 AM)


    Very glowing tributes to the memory of departed brother. Wonderfully penned. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

  • Anamta Ali Pasha (11/9/2015 6:06:00 AM)


    well this is suspiciuosly ecellent written..because my brother also have relations with me like a doll and my brother (Ahmad) cares, , , loves, , , respect, , , , and excellent brother in the world for me.... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 9, 2015



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