Ahh! once more the pang of my heart
takes me in that deep agony
of losing my smile
of burning in bile
and thinking of that blotty mile
when i was forlorn
and used to moan
and could sense nothing but pain
when joy and dreams
and light and cream
was washed in a raven rain
when dark was all my soul could see
and I just wondered
how my life would be
when fate seemed so cruel to me
and sky and stars and moon and winds
all glared and chuckled at me mockingly
that was the time
oh! the hell like days
that have left in my heart
several scorching lines
when we broke apart
and parted our ways....
well balanced and well metered...melancholy theme through the eyes of experience...a sense of growth -Tailor
S2 L6 shoulf be were instead of was. Very nice, despite the minor error. Danny
Beautiful poem Nidhi....I loved reading your poem...Even the flow is good..Keep writing...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a beautiful poem Nidhi. Nice flow of words.