Your Encouragement Results In My Poetreeee Poem by me poet yeps poet

Your Encouragement Results In My Poetreeee

Rating: 2.5


Excellent imagery of life
like my childhood too..

when I threw a stone out of my window
to strike the moon
mom said
son she isa gal
take care

next day I picked a catapult and struck the sun
she said son
don't kill the sun
he is life in you and me
from where will find food
if the sun is killed by you

then I took up a knife
to kill the cat
she said son....

yeah yeah mom
now I know it kill none
we all are simply one

pert of the GLORIOUS SUN
you and I amongst one

you once a daughter
and now I a son

Tuesday, June 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: boy,human,human and animal,human brain,moon,sun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 12 September 2019

You are your MOM`s Son, now she´s no more, YOU have become an independent one! BLESS YOU!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 September 2019

you once a daughter and now I a son me poet yeps poet.......................GOD made us like WE ARE TODAY, Red, green en gray......AMEN. A 10 Full Score and myriad of 10´s more..........thank you for inviting me to come. the tea was nicely presented, the sugar melted upon my tongue, no, I was not wrong.................I was in the right HOME.....GOD´s BLISS! AMEN

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Akhtar Jawad 12 June 2018

yeah yeah mom now I know it kill none we all are simply one Great lines

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 June 2018

thank u so muchly Jawad ji

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