Your Eyes Poem by millie st.claire
Your Eyes
If I was drowning in the sea
Would you dive right in and save me?
If I was falling like a star
Would you be right there to catch me?
If I was dreaming of your kiss
Would you look right through me?
On the street I'm waiting
In my heart it's raining
Your eyes are holding up the sky
Your eyes make me weak, I don't know why
Your eyes make me scared to tell the truth
I thought my heart was bullet-proof
Now I'm dancing on the roof
And everybody knows I'm into you
If my heart was sadder than a song
Would you still listen?
If my tears fell on you, one by one
Would you see them glisten?
On the street I'm waiting
In my heart it's raining
Every single thing you say makes me want to run away
Sometimes love's a rainy day but life goes on
Your eyes are holding up the sky
Your eyes make me weak, I don't know why
Your eyes make me scared to tell the truth
I thought my heart was bullet-proof
But I'm dancing on the roof
And everybody knows I'm into you
very very nice piece of writting. you put whats in your head onto paper very well. nice work
It gives me a rush of emotions, from both sides... It kind of makes me sad, there is only one person I can ask those questions and I would never be able to be with them... Good write anyway...
Millie! ! ! ! ! Simply excellent - you get better & better! To me this is dying to be set to music: it has the structure of a great lyric & a tune wouldn't take away from the sheer punch of the words. Keep on writing, you have a great gift. Thank you. WBB
WOW...thats really the only inteligent thing I can say...This was AMAZING! ! ! ...Holy Crow...You got talent! ! ! ! ..... <3Payy
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4/26/2024 2:35:16 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I love how you put this poem together. I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing. =)