millie st.claire


You Dont Need A Gun... - Poem by millie st.claire

How could you do this to me?
How could you make me believe you ever cared?

Your living your life without any regrets.
And where am I?
Stuck in this hole and i cant get out.

Im living my life with so many mistakes,
starting with you.

We've been through this.
All you have to do is say 'I love you',
and im right where you want me-dead.

After a year of happiness, making memories, laughter, earth shaking, hand holding, mountains exploding, comets shooting, birds singing, and love, you still shattered my dreams.

After you ended our eternity, I realized,
you dont need a gun to kill someone.


Comments about You Dont Need A Gun... by millie st.claire

  • (7/7/2009 11:12:00 PM)


    you capture the reader from the start. top to bottom a great piece. nice work (Report) Reply

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  • (7/18/2008 10:26:00 PM)


    that was phenomonal... i can dig it... a poem well writtin by a gr8 poet! ! keep it movin (Report) Reply

  • (7/15/2008 11:27:00 PM)


    you makes a dreamy world here
    After a year of happiness, making memories, laughter, earth shaking, hand holding, mountains exploding, comets shooting, birds singing, and love, you still shattered my dreams.
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  • (7/14/2008 12:23:00 PM)


    thats deep no doubt about it. so descriptive as well. i like it keep doin ya thang

    -mel
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  • (7/12/2008 11:56:00 PM)


    i love the way you put it.
    break ups are always bad.
    good write.
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  • (7/10/2008 1:37:00 PM)


    Very deep - & tragic that the hurt goes deep too. (Report) Reply

  • (7/7/2008 10:48:00 PM)


    Astonishing. Simply Beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Javier Falcon (7/6/2008 12:17:00 AM)


    Wow, it actually does not get any deeper than that, the listing does a great job in strengthening your writing, great write... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 6, 2008



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