Your Hips Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Your Hips

Rating: 5.0


Your hips sway like the ocean's gentle breeze,
Curved and supple, a sight that truly frees.
They dance with grace, a mesmerizing sight,
In every step, they emanate delight.

Silk and satin cling, accentuating curves,
Invoking desire that the heart preserves.
A rhythmic motion, a sensuous display,
Her beautiful hips, a celestial ballet.

With each sway, they ignite a fiery desire,
A magnetic pull that sets souls on fire.
Oh, how her hips whisper secrets untold,
In their embrace, a love story unfolds.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 29 May 2023

James McClain is in a new phase since I checked out his work a few years ago. The craft has been honed, but the sensuality remains. A bit Roethke-esque?

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David Wood 29 May 2023

Brilliantly penned! You have an eye for poetry as well! !

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Bri Edwards 29 May 2023

.......'fiery desire'. I guess you've also caused my fingers to wander on this keyboard, causing an unfinished comment to be sent. Lest I get TOO excited, I shall NOT reread for the tenth time. You may be the next U.S. Poet Laureate. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 29 May 2023

HOLY MACKEREL! ! ! 5 stars James, who've made ignited in this old body a

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From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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