Your Love Poem by Charlotte Lidia

Your Love

Rating: 5.0


When you look at me
I see a twinkle in your eye 
I see a kind of love
That makes me want to cry

When you talk to me
You talk with a voice so soft
A voice so sweet
It makes me breathless 
And full of heat

When you touch me
I melt inside
My knees get weak
And my confidence hides 

And when you say you love me
It's hard for me 
To believe
But you show it
And I see it 
I know with you
I'll never grief 

I love you
You love me 
And even though it's a cheesy ending
We're as happy as can be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 05 January 2012

Really I like this poem)))) the cheesy ending of love is always pathetic, but e'eryone wants true love! ! ! A beautiful poem! ! Plz read my poem))) love at first sight! ! !

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Rajendran Muthiah 05 January 2012

a beautiful poem in simple words with an end different from the one love affairs in the past had. The cheesy end of love these days lets them go in their own ways without tears shed or limbs broken. There is nice rhythmic movement. What happens really in true love is described. Cheers to the young poet.

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Charlotte Lidia

Charlotte Lidia

Chicago, Illinois
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