.your Mouth Poem by YURI DURAAN

.your Mouth

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You have a sensual mouth
its fullness defining your
bold outlook on life and
concurring with the
message in your eyes…
that of which your lips
don’t speak,
as they are not for
speaking
or telling tales
or calling me to you….

I am drawn to your lips
when you open them
slightly and your breathing
escapes onto my face….
Then I meet them
and we kiss.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
ngaio beck 24 July 2008

Ah the warmth, (and beauty) , of the unspoken thought which lives for you alone. Touchimg.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 19 July 2008

Nice poem reminds me of Pablo Neruda

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Ivan Donn Carswell 20 March 2008

A fine poem Yuri, it draws the reader on with an innocence and subtle intrigue. Perhaps 'it's' rather than 'their' in S1, L2 - not that it matters, the meaning is clear. Most enjoyable. Rgds, Ivan

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YURI DURAAN

YURI DURAAN

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