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your condensed love can't escape my investigating eye. nice write

I love this poem. Short and straight to the point. Nice.

Hmm what the name was before... hahahaha_SOul

Wooooooooooooo! Condensed, compressed, perhaps a tea spoon.

Love is what makes life sweet. A lovely poem Hari.

I don't keep my heart in a pot and twist the tongue..You will find me with heart, mind and tongue tied together in a line / very nice poem...lovin it