Your Name Poem by Jessel Jane Tevar Toring

Your Name

Rating: 2.8


The night whispers your name
till you passed by on my dreams.
The wind blew a little harder
till my covers felt a little colder
when the wind whispers your name-
and darkness revealed your shadow
as you passed by on my dreams.
The night found the rain again
as darkness revealed your shadow.
There's a crying whisper in the rain...
a crying whisper of your name.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reyvrex Questor Reyes 15 September 2012

A very good rendering of a subtle form of rhyming.

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Melvin Banggollay 25 November 2008

sweet and romnantic as the whispers of the wind in a serene night while candle lights lover's delight. take care, melvin

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