You And My Shadow Poem by Jessel Jane Tevar Toring

You And My Shadow

Rating: 3.0


You never noticed how your single glance
pressed my shadow on the wall.
And by simply smiling even once,
my pressed shadow falls
and melts into the ground.
As though some unseen force from you
had taken control around.
How come you never noticed
my shadow on the wall...
pressed by some unseen force
when by my name you called.
And how it hid beneath my feet
when your shadow's close to mine!
Just when I walked ahead of you,
it's almost left behind.
And now you kiss me with your lips,
your eyes have said it all.
But dear, have you noticed
my pressed shadow on the wall?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandy Player 11 January 2013

how different our obscured feelings can be from the smiles we put foward. very nicely explored.

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Bri Edwards 18 December 2012

quite interesting. thanks for sharing.

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Catrina Heart 18 January 2009

beautiful Jane...penned so well....heartfelt indeed...10+++

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