*a Little While Eternal Poem by Jessel Jane Tevar Toring

*a Little While Eternal

Rating: 3.3


Tell him i love to make these words
a song with his luscious lips...
and make the rhythm of my heart
be mellow music to his ears.
I'd love to make every moment with him
a little while eternal...
dancing and singing-
laughing, whispering
till the stars will slowly fall.

Tell him I love to make these lines
a love poem with his earnest smile,
and make his heart be sunlight
to my darkest sky.
I'd love to make every minute with him
a little while eternal-
feeling and loving...
dreaming while kissing
till the stars will slowly fall.

Tell him I love to make his hair
my shadow with his teasing eyes.
And make his voice a melody
till the fearful evening dies.
I'd love to make every day with him
a little while eternal...
smiling and touching-
holding, caressing
till the stars will slowly fall.

Wednesday, February 6, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: love,sweet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Gordley 07 February 2008

Jane I found this very lovely and romantic as heck. Thanks

2 0 Reply
James Jason Dye 20 December 2008

This was well-written and beautiful.

2 0 Reply
Kesav Easwaran 13 December 2008

lines romantic soft and sweet...breezing as one reads on...'make his heart be sunlight to my darkest sky...' is a pleasing phrase...good work, Jane...10

2 0 Reply
Raj Arumugam 08 November 2008

a lyrical and beautiful poem...it has a wonderful ring and rhythm to it....

3 1 Reply
Ashraful Musaddeq 19 October 2008

10 for this lovely love poem.

3 1 Reply
Geovanni Leaño 10 February 2008

wow! i'm speechless! i'm too lucky to have discovered this site! ^_^ well anyway i just wanted to inform you Jane that this poem left my heart warm and touched my face with a smile ^_^ thanks! -GanNi

3 1 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success