Friday, November 15, 2019

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At last I arrived here
To find You
A votive candle lit up in me
In Your honor.
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla
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Aniruddha Pathak 18 November 2019

an introspective prayer, well written and one that come from heart cleansed by repentance.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 November 2019

I wish to establish You in my thoughts I extend a hearty invitation to You I keep reciting Your name incessantly I seek Your permission to be with You.......nice expression. Beautiful prayer is well executed in a beautiful poem, Thanks for sharing.

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Kingsley Egbukole 15 November 2019

Learned to be humble and considerate in a relationship. Got a 10. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH and leave your comments.

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