Your Shadow Is Your Beloved Wife........ Poem by Ravi Sathasivam

Your Shadow Is Your Beloved Wife........

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When you married your wife
you have promised her to take care till you end
Marriage is a fulfillment of dreams
With these promised dreams she stepped in your
house as a beautiful wife
She held your hands with her dreams
She gave her heart to you with love and faith
She walked along with you when you had hard time
She gave you everything what ever she had
Today you made her dreams shuttered
Today you made her heart suffer with pain of love
Today you made her walk along with pain and struggle
Today you made her eyes dim with salty tears
Today Your unfaithfulness made her life miserable
Today you live with out her love and shadow
Today your heart is refusing to accept her as a wife
But one day you will realize her value and her faithful love
when you struggle with your pain and the agony that make you handicap.
On that day you will realize your wife is your shadow that holds on you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adryan Barnathan 18 October 2004

This poem holds all the elements for people to see themselves wholely. Love is blind when it is right under our noses...This is good medicine! Warmly, Adrienne

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 26 September 2009

a very nice poem, with love and care oozing, life will be great if both husband and wife serve each other with love and care.

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Luwi Habte 26 September 2009

yes, couples have to respect each other so very true luwi

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Surya . 26 September 2009

a poem teaching a good lesson in life voted10 surya

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 June 2010

‘Wife-Bashing [WB]’ [psychically and physically] is an abortive product of male dominated society…even in G-8 countries we find it …apart from developing and underdeveloped countries…this is an poetic appeal nicely addressed to such Wife-Basher …will they ponder over…? .... ….thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Seema Chowdhury 27 September 2009

sir, thank you very much for writing such a beautiful and meaningful poem. marriage is a relationship of love, trust and respect. it should be honoured right from the start till the ends of your lives.

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Chitra - 26 September 2009

lessons of life..mutual respect is the key!

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there is a poet in me! 26 September 2009

so true... a realistic good poem.... thanks for sharing....

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Marieta Maglas 26 September 2009

wonderful realistic poem, a good lesson, thank you for sharing....10

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