Your Words Poem by Kimber Lee Iacona

Your Words

Rating: 5.0


Your words were like setting flames to fire
Waiting for the right moment and then you go and
completely break down
Your words were like a kiss from the long-lost
Prince Charming himself
Cold as ice but still irresistible not to say no
Your words were like the wind calling over the Pyrenees Mountains
Whispering how everything is just as perfect as it is
But we all know that is just another white lie
Your words were like deception, dripping from your lips
Luring me in until it's impossible to get out of
Yet you still use your words like a fish out of water gasps for air

Your words were so paper-thin as if they would break into millions of pieces
If someone were to come as far as lightly touching it
Your words were like spoiled milk
There would always be a smell that lingered
Your words were like the flu just as contagious as someone
letting out a yawn
Your words were like crystals piercing skin at a split second
Your words were indescribable and don't sit there and tell me that they aren't

Your words were like punches straight to my heart
Enticingly getting worse by the minute
Your words cannot control me nor define me
Now you're on your knees bleeding that your words meant
Nothing and it was just a misunderstanding

I'm done with your sick and twisted games
Tired of being pushed around and breaking down overtime I hear your name
Your words were the bully that beat me down until I could barely stand
So, don't tell me your words meant nothing
Because everyone can see that they meant something.

Your Words
Friday, June 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I am a inspiring poet trying to figure out this world, one step at a time. I am a singer and musician who wants to let the world know what I can do. I am a good listener and will comfort you when your down. I am a girl trying to figure out who she really is.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 16 June 2017

Rich flow of thought confronting deceit, well articulated and elegantly brought forth from inner recesses of the heart with insight. Your employment of good similes to drive home your conviction is both appropriate and poetically remarkable. A well drafted poem. Thanks for sharing and do remain blessed Kimberlee.

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Malcolm Two 17 June 2017

Lovely poem. Will be waiting for more poems by you

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Kimberlee Iacona 17 June 2017

Thank you so much. There will be more to come, don't worry.

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aunt jennie 10 September 2018

I am so very proud of you and so sorry I was too weak to help you in your young years.

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Jazib Kamalvi 30 June 2017

A good start from word. Thanks

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Rajnish Manga 30 June 2017

This poem gives an insightful presentation of a chunk of human nature. Nice to read about the person you actually are through the Poet's Notes given above. Thanks a lot, Dear KimberLee. Your words were so paper-thin as if they would break into millions of pieces If someone were to come as far as lightly touching it

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Abdul Basit 19 June 2017

yh his words meant something.brilliant creativity

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Soul Watcher 17 June 2017

Hey there, are you new here? very glad to read your poem Your Words So true: So, don't tell me your words meant nothing Because everyone can see that they meant something.

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Kimberlee Iacona 17 June 2017

Yes, I am new here. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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