Yours Affectionately Poem by Ravi Panamanna

Yours Affectionately

Rating: 5.0


A twinkling star glided unto me
Like thy enchanted look.
A flood of moonlight
Swept over me
Like thy enchanted kiss.

A wave of melody filled my heart
Like thy honey sweet voice.
A wave of solitude
Disappeared from my life
As thee began to whisper within me.

And now, time gently flows,
The brook hath left the dales.
I see a smiling face
Where dwells impressions of a dream,
Where my ardent thoughts gently sleep.

Thou art out of my vales;
Thou art out of my springs.
Yet I feel contended-
Thee hath gifted to my boyhood winds
A whispering poem for the rest of my sojourn.

Yours Affectionately
Saturday, January 31, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: affinity and love,Love,bittersweet love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

that was an excellent write...th flow of the poem was very good

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This is an extremely well written poem.. nice

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Indira Renganathan 26 April 2009

A whispering poem for the rest of my sojourn....sometimes dreamt thoughts caress our souls...words are strung with proper fragrance...skillful

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Pandian Angelina 02 May 2009

Impeccable - Language, Words, Verse, Weave & flow of thought and of couse a beautiful and lovely poem - soft, sweet and sad!

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 11 February 2010

your writing is superb always. This poem is a marvellous conjuction of poetry and reflection. Nature is so beautifully wedded to your poetic thoughts, that I have read the poem twice or thrice. Write a lot of them. plz read my comment on you as a poet.

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Anju Addanki 25 September 2009

Hi thats a wonderful write.

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Rachel Butler 17 September 2009

A twinkling star glided unto me Like thy enchanted look. Rachel Ann Butler

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 17 September 2009

‘Where my ardent thoughts gently sleep.’ What a line? Poet Sir enjoyed much The+ dr. sakti Please read my Amnesia 1-5

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Surya . 04 June 2009

hey really wonderfull language. wonderfull theme. well penned. posted 10 love surya

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Ravi Panamanna

Ravi Panamanna

Ottapalam- Kerala State- India
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