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japanese dove on tree

high coo

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Michael Shepherd 14 May 2005

Nice point, Ghada! So maybe a third line? Would you add it? Something like japanese dove on tree high coo long echo

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Ghada Shahbender 14 May 2005

A coo so high its recruited writers from all over the world! Short but far from simple. GS

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Ghada Shahbender 14 May 2005

Yes. Brilliant! It is long and far reaching. GS

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Colleen Courtney 29 April 2014

This is so imaginative! Love this!

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I write haiku and tanka.I'm very self conscience about the syllables and lines.Cute haiku-defies the norm.Ten for innovative.

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Raynette Eitel 17 May 2005

That is so funny! I attended a haiku workshop once, given by a Japanese man who gave the definition: a nature poem of three lines...five syllables in the first and third, and seven in the middle and ALWAYS WRITTEN BY A JAPANESE! ! Yours is too good. Raynette

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Ghada Shahbender 15 May 2005

'Ostaz': Arabic for master and professor! GS

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Michael Shepherd 14 May 2005

japanese dove on tree high coo long echo flies far

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