ye hamari zindagi ke panne...
kavi bikhre, kavi simte...
tufano ke thapedon me...
kavi tute, kavi sambhle...
ulajh si gai hai zindagi...
na jane kis dorahe pe...
jise suljhate huye, ...
mujhe beetein kai arse....
safar lamba hai ye mera...
dagar aasan nhi lagte...
yaha pal-pal me jane kyu...
mausam hai badalte...
hai ummid ek jaria...
chali hun main jis vaste...
kavi to mil hi jayengi...
mujhe wo manjil ke rashtein....
#ye hamari zindagi ke panne......
Vastavikta se parichay karvat zindigi k panne Very well written :)
bas ek kosish ki hai....zindagi ko pannon pe utarne ki.....Rishi Thakkar
i am preparing to place this Hindi poem in my/our February 2017 showcase, in Section A. It has an English translation by Unnikrishnan E S on PH, entitled It Is Life. this poem is scheduled to appear in Feb.2017's Section C, but Section C is not ready yet, as of today. thanks. bri :)
Very beautifully written. Loved to read again and again...
Ati sunder bhavnaapoorn abhivaykti. Meri post PYAR pr aane ke liye haardik dhanyvaad :)
waah bahuth khoob..lajavab ahai... bus ek chota sa dought youn samjho ki aap to chand poems me 'kavi likha hai jiska meanig poet hai...mujhe lagta hai ki shayad aap ka matlab kabhi se hai... ye hamari zindagi ke panne... kavi bikhre, kavi simte... tufano ke thapedon me... kavi tute, kavi sambhle.. please dont mind just i need to clear my dought...
awsome poem 10++ ye hamari zindagi ke panne... kavi bikhre, kavi simte... tufano ke thapedon me... kavi tute, kavi sambhle...10++++
What a beautiful poem, I was amazed.
sukariya sir.....