irum inayat

Rookie - 1 Points (16 Dec 1985 / Pakistan)

Down in the dumps


Down in the dumps

Echoing the sighs of melancholy

In the bliss of sapphire

Drawing the shrugs of morose
Thee’ lonesome spirit

Submitted: Saturday, April 20, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, October 02, 2013

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I dont remember exactly but it seems to me like I was in the saddest of times when I wrote these lines.

Comments about this poem (Down in the dumps by irum inayat )

  • Rookie - 929 Points Saadat Tahir (5/4/2013 4:30:00 AM)

    some moments are fleeting and when captured in nice verse become immortal
    nice lexicon feely lines that convey the mood with flair

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  • Rookie - 603 Points Shahzia Batool (5/4/2013 3:11:00 AM)

    right capturing of that melancholy in such deep poetic lines...you know the economy! ! ! (Report) Reply

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