irum inayat

Rookie - 1 Points (16 Dec 1985 / Pakistan)

Down In The Dumps - Poem by irum inayat

Down in the dumps

Echoing the sighs of melancholy

In the bliss of sapphire

Drawing the shrugs of morose
Thee’ lonesome spirit


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I dont remember exactly but it seems to me like I was in the saddest of times when I wrote these lines.

Comments about Down In The Dumps by irum inayat

  • Veteran Poet - 1,327 Points Saadat Tahir (5/4/2013 4:30:00 AM)

    some moments are fleeting and when captured in nice verse become immortal
    nice lexicon feely lines that convey the mood with flair

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,313 Points Shahzia Batool (5/4/2013 3:11:00 AM)

    right capturing of that melancholy in such deep poetic lines...you know the economy! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 20, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 2, 2013


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