Ellie Sutton Poems

A dropp in the ocean,
It disturbs the motion
Of the world, that spins in time to the sound
Of nature’s intention,
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What is love? Is it a statement? No.
A form to be contained inside one's soul
And sheltered from the world, forced to fly solo?
No. Love contains your soul, love makes you whole.
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2000
Time to make a change.
No more detours, deliberation, distractions,
Excuses won’t excuse you now.
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When the sun peeps through the curtains
And the kids come out to play,
You'll find me in my bedroom
So the monster stays away.
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I'd like to give a little explanation before submitting this poem.
For the 18 months I've been battling with anorexia. I wrote the first verse whilst in the thick of it, and the second 6 months later, beginning to come out of the other end.
I'd appriciate feedback :)
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Are the sands of time
So cruel? How they cause
Us to forget times that mean
More than should ever be forgotten.
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Dear Grandad, this hurdle's the last,
A curtain call for all that's passed,
Despite this shroud,
You've done us proud,
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Since when was writing poetry
Reserved for a minority
Or given rules set out in stone
Which stifle wit
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Realisation number one;

I don't know my own future,
And time's erased my past,
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