A Glimpse Into You Poem by Lacey UnKnown

A Glimpse Into You

Rating: 2.4


Thanks Calah for supplying an ending to this poem when I was mentally blocked in Chem! And thanks to Bethany for the inspiration and finally seeing what I see in him!

As I quickly glance your way
I get a small look into your heart
For once, I get to see
The vulnerability
As I look deeper I see you searching
I notice the awe in your gorgeous brown eyes
It's hard to believe that I'm looking at you
You never expose this contemplative side
I see you dwelling deep in God's presence
I look closer and see the love in your eyes
The song ends
You look up
Our eyes meet
You somehow cast a spell on me
I can't look away
A small smile briefly crosses your face
I quickly look down
Nervous, I glance up
To see you still watching
I smile back
Looking into your chocolate eyes
I melt into a puddle
Feeling rich yet poor
Falling all the more
My smirk gives way
That glance I got today
Your smile deceives you
For once I saw the truth

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Chavez 16 July 2008

Wow this is a very well thought out and awe inspiring piece :)

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Sandra Nina 30 April 2008

Aww I love your poem so much words emotions put into it. Lover it. Sandra

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Wandering Scarlet 25 April 2008

touching poem. love at first sight?

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