001 An Old Mother's Wash Poem by Lori Boulard

001 An Old Mother's Wash

Rating: 5.0


Only she knows the ritual's worth-
the tactile truth of scrubbed
and spun generations in cloth.
Neatly folded squares of mother
and child in wicker on the stair.

It all comes out in the wash;
an old wives' tale indeed.
Spring greens and summer reds
bleach clean into the runoff, but
sins and joy fuse to fibers
remaining as traces in the weave,
interlocked until the moths gain ground,
the patterns of family tattooed
to wool and broken bone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 15 November 2006

A word painting of a great human being. You are a keen observer of life. Thank you for sharing. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Tailor Bell 05 November 2006

completely agree with Brian and David...deep captivating work. superb read. -Tailor

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Brian Dorn 17 October 2006

Wow, great write, Lori... very profound! Brian

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