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(018) Blessed By God (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0

A new born baby
Cries loud, entering this world
Responds to Mom’s touch

Nov.4/06

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Lisa Wilkinson 29 March 2007

Mel, I just love Haiku's, especially using traditional form (5,7,5) well done, true words. I have lots of Haikus too, check them out if you like, keep them coming and I will keep reading and look out for you.

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Kurt Rees 20 February 2007

short and sweet.... very nice!

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Diane Violet 04 November 2006

So true, as mom responds to the cry. Excellent Melvina. All the best, Diane

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nn mn 04 November 2006

Nice - but equally true: Responds to Mom’s non-touch.

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David Tanguay 04 November 2006

another fine way of describing a true blessing

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 04 November 2006

Gorgeous, and oh so absolute in purity....A FINE EXHIBIT OF MODERNIST HAIKU, but while maintaining the Zen, Traditoionalist metreing....Nice Job, Melvina '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{ F j R }

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