03/20/2008 Can'T Sleep ♥ Poem by Coreena Dejesus

03/20/2008 Can'T Sleep ♥

Rating: 5.0


I'm laying here in bed drifting fast alseep,
Holding on and reviewing every memory I keep.
I think about every little argument we've had.
Every word type spoken the good, happy, and sad.
I drift in and out crying it’s a quarter to ten.
I'm trying to figure out how my heart will mend.
I lay here alone...alone my bed so empty and cold,
Memories haunt me I'm fixed on every lie you told.
Confused...I want to tell you everything is ok,
Call you up and tell you that you can stay.
But as I lay here thinking I know I just can't,
My mind going through a constant rant.
I can't sleep I know you love me but why,
Why would you do this toss and turn and sigh.
I lay here in bed not drifting asleep.
Every memory I wish I couldn't keep.

March 2008 (Dedicated to Vernon Burchett)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abha Sharma 25 March 2008

My mind going through a constant rant. I can't sleep.......... so true........ we all feel the same sometimes...beautifully expressed.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 23 March 2008

heart when haunting holding the tears sleeps when deferred by the memories lane yet shadowed by the ruse yet love may bloom again as darkness when defused..................yet it dazzles by marvel with the woes..........beautiful peace,10/10, thanks for asharing

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Original Unknown Girl 20 March 2008

Marvellous what the mind can create though whilst struggling with sleep. I often get my best ideas for poems in the wee small hours! Good poem, strong sentiments expressed well. HG: -) xx

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Coreena Dejesus

Coreena Dejesus

USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI)
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