03/19/2008 Love Lost Depressed Poem by Coreena Dejesus
03/19/2008 Love Lost Depressed
My heart belongs to someone I love,
Someone I constantly think of.
Strong woman don't cry not a tear,
Supposed to lock up show no fear.
He's torn my heart it's slashed,
Strong woman don't cry- I've crashed.
My emotions are flying no control,
He completed me I'm not whole.
I've left him nothing can compare,
My heart is broken in despair.
My mind told me I can't go back,
Focus on my life get on track.
But why leave him you think,
That seems to be the missing link.
Someone told me he betrayed me,
I tried to look past it but I see.
I have a constant thought on repeat,
What if he didn't intend to cheat.
Mistake or not thoughts obsessed,
My heart my life my love - I'm depressed.
Nice way of expressing deep emotions.....I would say nothing is permenent in this world.Try to love you more then rest fall in line.Nothing more than you.Your life is precious.No one can tear your heart.........It is you who can decide and go ahead...........Imagery is good in poetry only to have better impact which is there in your poem it is impressive so much that it makes me cry.....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/4/2024 12:52:18 PM # 1.0.0.1119
the hurtful feeling well potrayed i agree with vidyadhr it sure makes me cry thanks for sharing peace jibin