04 (Sakuntala) Sakuntala Entertained Dushyanta Poem by Rajaram Ramachandran

04 (Sakuntala) Sakuntala Entertained Dushyanta

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While closely watching Sakuntala,
A doubt came to Dushyanta,
“Was she born to his father,
Thro’ a different caste mother? ”

“Since she covets my mind,
As queen she’s fit, I find.
When there’s a doubt
Better, I get the fact.”

Sakuntala shouted, “Help me.
O’er my face flies a black bee.
From jasmine bush, it came,
I’m afraid of the same.”

The black bee circled around
Her worried face, he found.
Her eye brows danced
O’er her eyes, he observed.

He was jealous of the bee,
“Oh bee, you’re so free
To touch her eye brows
And tell secrets in her ears.”

“Oh you honey-stealing-bee,
Near her, you’re lucky to be,
To taste her nectar like lower lip,
Despite her chasing you up.”

“While I’m waiting here
To know the facts from her,
You’re fortunate to be near
And move closely with her.”

She cried aloud again,
“My cry here is in vain.
Friends, please help me.
From this bee, save me.”

“Who’re we to help you?
Dushyanta will help you
Think of him, he’s the best.
As he rules this holy forest.”

Like this, her friends told.
When Dushyanta heard,
For help, he rushed out,
And before them he went.

“Under the command,
Of Puru lies this land,
Where punishment is given
To the criminals known.”

“Who’s that culprit
In this holy spot
Who dares to tease
These young virgins? ”

Anusuya answered him
“A big bee is causing harm
To Sakuntala, who’s scared.
She’s simply worried.”

He asked Sakuntala then,
“Hope you’re all fine?
Do you perform penance,
Without any hindrance?

Sakuntala stood confused
She didn’t utter a word.
Anusuya then advised her
To serve him food and water.

He was shown a cool seat,
Under the tree-shade to sit,
By Pryamvada, as a guest,
Who needed proper rest.

“I feel already honoured
By your kind words, ” he said,
So, I need nothing else,
Well, nothing more or less.”

“All of you may be tired,
So, here you be seated.”
They heard his request
And with him they sat.

Sakuntala felt, “How’s it
I get unholy thought,
When I just meet
This unusual guest? ”

Destiny played its role,
Perhaps, for this girl
To have this young man,
As a partner of her own.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 20 May 2008

The caste system - tragic for love. I support a boy in INDIA named MUNNU. I'll have to write him about the caste system, does it still exist? ? ? ?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 August 2009

“Since she covets my mind, As queen she’s fit, I find. When there’s a doubt Better, I get the fact.”....found all the qualities of ueen in her but some doubts shadowed him.. beuatiful write....10

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Does she doubt her identity as a dark bee clouds her truthful self and does prince save her?

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Kesav Easwaran 04 June 2008

readers are able to drink the romantic nectar flowing in those lines there...does the king's question on her parentage fly as a black bee on her beautiful face? !

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Sandra Fowler 23 May 2008

A charming, lyrical write. It is another world filled with romance and tradition. As always, I learn much about Eastern culture via your eloquent pen. Warm regards, Sandra

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Raman Savithiri 22 May 2008

I enjoyed the 'bee episode'. Your poem has come out very well with nice rhyming. In Viswamitra I saw a thorn pricking Sakuntala's tender feet and Dushyanth saving her. Here it is bit different. I just wonder how in this age you write the 'Kaathal' scenes with lovely phrases. Really your poem will be thrilling for lovers.

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Rajaram Ramachandran

Rajaram Ramachandran

Chennai born, now at Juhu, Mumbai, India
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