Manonton Dalan

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040910e Trees Can Make You Cry - Poem by Manonton Dalan

pooling water on walkways
yellowing from pollen cake
rain is a relief for allergies
it gathers all these floaters
that give restricted breathing,
coughing, sneezing and tears

okay if those trees it came from
produce edible fruits or seeds
maybe medicine we don't know
so far i haven't seen that does
tears could be preventing view
come to virginia, you'll know

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  • (4/9/2010 3:27:00 PM)


    i don't get it.: ( :) your poem is a 7 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 9, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, April 9, 2010


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