certain stillness up above
harmony after raindrop
birds start singing again
trees dripping wet; clean
fruit washed; so beautiful to look at
i could see ants crawling on branch
later on, grass grow, flowers bloom
as grasshoppers hopping for room
feel freshness of wind blow
hear ruffling leaves in hollow
see ebbing river; crystal clear
breath freely love is here
Beautiful Poem, I can feel and see the freshness after rain.. nostalgia hitting.. I remember the rain in Seattle.. though I come from the rain monsoon country I haven't seen rain like that I saw in Seattle, light, gentle, unrelenting, .. thanks for sharing
Verily, a poem full of imagery and freshness that touches the soul...10 I invite you to read my poems
An interesting acheivement. The gradual progression into rhyming couplets makes me think of a dropp of water steadily flowing into a trickle and then a stream, growing with the swell of water... though I may be completely wrong! Even if I am I still thoroughly enjoyed it so well done x
a nice refreshing poem of nature doing her best to clean and quench the things that she loves......well written.
Great imagery here Manonton. I love the smell of the earth after the rain. Everything is washed clean and fresh.
With rain a lot of changes happen in Nature. Leaves grow greener, flowers bloom, birds begin singing again and everyone feels fresh! A lovely write!
This is wonderful poem of yours as you mentioned about the beauty around to notice and to pen down, very nice poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A nice description, how rains affect life on the earth.