clouds mingling reflecting sun
it's bright and so great for fun
sun blocker news on this land
coco oil, orange peeling, grand
umbrella, a fan, a shed of a tree
very nice place, you should be
looking your eyes heaven
muggy hot all forgotten
sweet smile to come along
reverberates to a love song
lyrics could be words you said
in rhymes or in mumble thread
but feeling you’re near me
enough to rock me gently
tender touch makes us one
admiring beauty all around
kisses could seal the seams
hugs, wonderful living dreams
when darkness harvest light
sun creatures on homing flight
twinkles dotting the horizon
soft shadows from the moon
rest infinite craving of a flesh
you; me would surely be please
it's really cool the way u see the world.. nice poem with magnificent imaginary... =)
A moving composition with wonderful metaphors,10 for it.
you have the ability to take people to the most beautiful places of the world with your words. breathtaking imagery my friend.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I just could smell, taste, and feel your poem with all my senses my dear... too well penned, I like the way you contact your feelings and express it with all the colours and flavors... for real I could feel it! Thanks for sharing!