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I Remember

Rating: 4.8

street lights are still lit up
as she fills my coffee cup
with same greeting everyday
"how's your mom doing today? "
with a simple grin and "okay, "
she hands me bagle and jelly

pinching coins from my pocket
dropping a quarter on the carpet
i lean back to see where it lands

rub my back on somebody's hands
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Ashraful Musaddeq 07 September 2008

'yes, i give a last quick look at her she’s so pretty i could remember' so natural, so beautiful.

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Isabella Swan 16 September 2008

u no this captures so much♥

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M Asim Nehal 22 November 2015

When heart is filled with love we all get same feeling, nicely written.10

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 December 2015

i blush, i feel my heart pounds i touch her arm; whisper sorry she waves her hand; smiles at me yes, i give a last quick look at her she's so pretty i could remember.. attraction, love, fascination, woman. all a mystery in life and emotions. thank you for all your lovely expressions in this poem. tony

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Hemendra Singh Deopa 20 December 2015

Wow this is a good one, she must be very beautiful I can imagine. Hope you meet her almost everyday by now.

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Jane Campion 12 June 2019

Reminds me I need a cup of coffee. Cheer!

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Chinedu Dike 03 June 2019

An insightful piece of poetry, well conceived and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 March 2019

Street lights are still up and the fill the coffee cup. You have brilliantly penned this excellent poem. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely gem.

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Daria Pinfold 19 June 2017

It made me smile how romantic and lovely it is, thank you. At times the things we will remember throughout the whole life happen out of a sudden.

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Brenda Aniban 06 November 2016

A nice romantic poem

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