I Remember Poem by Manonton Dalan

I Remember

Rating: 4.8


street lights are still lit up
as she fills my coffee cup
with same greeting everyday
"how's your mom doing today? "
with a simple grin and "okay, "
she hands me bagle and jelly

pinching coins from my pocket
dropping a quarter on the carpet
i lean back to see where it lands
rub my back on somebody's hands
"excuse me, may i help you please? "
i turn around my lips is on her face

i blush, i feel my heart pounds
i touch her arm; whisper sorry
she waves her hand; smiles at me
yes, i give a last quick look at her
she's so pretty i could remember

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 07 September 2008

'yes, i give a last quick look at her she’s so pretty i could remember' so natural, so beautiful.

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Isabella Swan 16 September 2008

u no this captures so much♥

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 December 2015

i blush, i feel my heart pounds i touch her arm; whisper sorry she waves her hand; smiles at me yes, i give a last quick look at her she's so pretty i could remember.. attraction, love, fascination, woman. all a mystery in life and emotions. thank you for all your lovely expressions in this poem. tony

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M Asim Nehal 22 November 2015

When heart is filled with love we all get same feeling, nicely written.10

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Anitah Muwanguzi 03 December 2015

hahahha. Flirty good piece. Enjoyed the experience.

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Jane Campion 12 June 2019

Reminds me I need a cup of coffee. Cheer!

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Chinedu Dike 03 June 2019

An insightful piece of poetry, well conceived and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 March 2019

Street lights are still up and the fill the coffee cup. You have brilliantly penned this excellent poem. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely gem.

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Brenda Aniban 06 November 2016

A nice romantic poem

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 02 August 2016

Very nice poem. Thanks for sharing such an experience.

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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