Manonton Dalan

Gold Star - 31,675 Points (virginia, usa)

050111i Looking Around - Poem by Manonton Dalan

sun up so as my eyelashes
searching for green blades
after fierce rain that went thru
i can only find petals, not you
i stop to think, can't remember
but my thirst is telling me true

scattered cups where's mine
i open fridge, orange juice
too sweet for this time of day
bottle of water would do tricks
i saw your notes, would be night
to reach temple on sand dune


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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 1, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 5, 2011


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