Manonton Dalan

Gold Star - 31,798 Points (virginia, usa)

050111o Elements Of Surprise - Poem by Manonton Dalan

i paced my room thinking
either going take pictures
or write whole day, i moan
i'm watching comedy movie
relaxing but painful to actor
addressing fake laughter

boring when you know scripts
might as well turn it off or switch
naah! i'm watching art of delivery
flow and timing shows how good
words are distracting elements
few knows but it's always there


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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 1, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 4, 2011


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