...You Amaze Me Poem by Manonton Dalan
...You Amaze Me
more... i heard
your passion
pigmenting new desire
as sweet as grapes
on summer breeze
crystallizing
to glimpse of sunshine
when dry leaves
separate from vines
gently fluttering to gravity
unwilling to touch ground
i focus my eyes on you
looking at your inner soul
finding my way deep
that only you
could keep
but i insist
you’re remarkable
wowwwwwwwwww! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! beautiful.........what a great write............i wish someone had written that to me! ! hehe......10 plus my friend........superb! !
A stunning penning. The simple structure conveys the emotion and the slight occasional rhyme helps it along in its flow. Very impressive. x
A gentle ode to a loved one using nature's wonder as a yardstick which I'm sure it would be pleasing to recieve..thanks regards
Great job... I cant wait to read more. I hope you would return the favor. :)
Dear Sir Poet, marakep ya tula so ginawa yu salamat ya baled, diane
Superb poem, I liked it.....my pick from your poem....10 i focus my eyes on you looking at your inner soul
A remarkable poem, very well written, stems from the heart of a romantic person. Thank you, RoseAnn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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9/21/2023 10:50:33 AM # 1.0.0.1113
sweet and romantic... nice penning...