...You Amaze Me Poem by Manonton Dalan

...You Amaze Me

Rating: 3.6

more... i heard
your passion
pigmenting new desire
as sweet as grapes
on summer breeze
to glimpse of sunshine

when dry leaves
separate from vines
gently fluttering to gravity
unwilling to touch ground
i focus my eyes on you
looking at your inner soul
finding my way deep
that only you
could keep
but i insist
you’re remarkable


sweet and romantic... nice penning...

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Reshma Ramesh 01 December 2008

wowwwwwwwwww! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! beautiful.........what a great write............i wish someone had written that to me! ! hehe......10 plus my friend........superb! !

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Steffi Webster 28 November 2008

A stunning penning. The simple structure conveys the emotion and the slight occasional rhyme helps it along in its flow. Very impressive. x

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Ken E Hall 08 April 2010

A gentle ode to a loved one using nature's wonder as a yardstick which I'm sure it would be pleasing to recieve..thanks regards

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Matthew Foor 24 January 2013

Great job... I cant wait to read more. I hope you would return the favor. :)

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Diane Montemayor 15 August 2016

Dear Sir Poet, marakep ya tula so ginawa yu salamat ya baled, diane

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Bharati Nayak 17 January 2016

The poem is really amazing.

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Sofia Kioroglou 14 January 2016

Very unique poetic diction! Luvz it!

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M Asim Nehal 29 December 2015

Superb poem, I liked it.....my pick from your poem....10 i focus my eyes on you looking at your inner soul

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Roseann Shawiak 05 April 2015

A remarkable poem, very well written, stems from the heart of a romantic person. Thank you, RoseAnn

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