Manonton Dalan

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051010u Omg I Made It - Poem by Manonton Dalan

sun is peeping through the palms
teasing her lips to your rosy cheeks
waves are trying to reach your legs
pushing wind to blow a gentle kiss
while my eyes are brushing your lips
making you smile and that's all it takes

broke my spoon so we have one
we take turns feeding each other
i give you extra; you need energy
will be walking length of shoreline
you know we made it; you and me
here's kiss and hug before we dine

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my thanks to my best friend
nin, i made it to 1000. i can't
feel greater without her. thanks
God and thank you my dearest
readers.


Comments about 051010u Omg I Made It by Manonton Dalan

  • (5/10/2010 9:35:00 PM)


    yey! ! i'm dizzy looking up. we're all celebrating for you.
    here's wishing you 2k more by the end of 2010 :) all the best...
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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 10, 2010



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